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Eccho25 · 18 Apr 2023 -
So this is a story all about how two guys switch bodies with their female bullies and have a reeeeeeeeally fun time.
I saw this as a commission and took it a while ago and kinda took too long with it, so if the OP is still here............sowwy. Hope you enjoy anyways. -
Milo couldn’t be happier with his life right now. He’s at the tail end of the worst part of his life, his freelancing career is starting to get off the ground, and he’s now in a relationship with the greatest girl he’s ever come into contact with. He never thought he’d be this happy in his senior year.
“Shut up,” Rosaline says with a giggle, lightly shoving Milo, “I like kittens. Leave me alone.”
“I’m just saying they’re little prissy brats,” Milo retorts with a shrug, “Yeah, they’re cute, but they just go around ordering you around like they own everything. They’re like the late stages for a spoiled rich kid.”
“Well, I don’t care what you say. I’m getting one.”
“And I’m not gonna stop you. I’ll just place it somewhere really high if it annoys me.”
“Then it’ll climb back down and scratch you.”
“Then I’ll eat its food.”
“Then it’ll bite you.”
“Then I’ll bite it back to assert dominance.”
Rosaline giggles again at Milo before saying,
“Oh my gosh, you’re such a jerk.”
“What, you never complained when I ate your kitten before. What’s different now?”
“Milo, stooop.”
As the pair enjoy each other’s company, Milo’s friend, Rayleigh approaches them, taking note of their merriment.
“What’s up, lovebirds?” he starts, “What’s going on here?”
“Nothing much,” Milo answers, “Just discussing how she wants her kitty in my mouth and how it’ll result in me getting scratched.”
Rosaline gasps and blushes at Milo’s phrasing before pounding his shoulder, prompting him to laugh at her embarrassment.
“Classy, you two, real classy,” Rayleigh says with a smirk, “Well, the reason I came over here was to inform you that Alex is inviting everyone to his house for a bit of an end of the year get together. So you guys wanna ride with me or do you wanna continue your kitten conversation at your place first?”
Rosaline pouts at his statement before folding her arms. Milo embraces her in his arm before answering with,
“Yeah, we’ll go. Didn’t think that Alex was the party type.”
“Senior year just brings out the inner party animal, I guess.”
“That honestly doesn’t surprise me. Especially since he’s been stressing like crazy since the year started.”
“Yeah, this might be more therapeutic for him than anything. Alright, I’ll tell him he’s got two others on the guest list.”
Rayleigh walks away, leaving the …
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Hey Eccho I think I'm going to make a comment before I read this. First of all I want to apologise. How I conveyed my original idea was so messy. I was experimenting on the site and didn't realise there wasn't any edit button. I can really struggle with writing my thoughts or sentences in general if I don't pay extra attention to what I'm doing like now and read over everything multiple times. Lol. I am extremely grateful you still decided to post something especially when the incentive to do so was taken away. Its been a learning experience on my end and I don't believe you have anything to apologise for because I can admit the improvement was only needed on my end.
Wow wow. You somehow managed to deliver everything I wanted and more. The dialogue honestly made me laugh out loud and you definitely nailed all the kinks as requested. Very well written piece that was flawlessly executed. I feel bad that this can't be rewarded with the original 100 dollar plus commission amount. To make up for this I'll definitely be giving you and this story a shout out wherever I can. Whoever decides to read this please support Eccho25. On a side note, to the other author that also accepted this particular commission I still look forward to reading your interpretation. This version of the story was completely unexpected but does not influence my expectations in terms of potential comparisons. Though I would understand if this was still rather off-putting so I would accept if major alterations were made as a result in terms of characters and plot.
Well, first, no need to apologize. It was still comprehensible and it was still fun to write, so all's well. As for compensation, I'm still getting tips for it that I'm highly grateful for. Might not add up to $100, but it's still something.
And thank you so murch. You flatter me. Thanks for the prompt to work off of.